Introduce yourself and your purpose to study English
My name is Nguyen Dan Phuong, and I am in the first year in high school. I would be grateful to introduce something about myself, which are my interests, ambitions, and my justification for studying English.
First, I have a taste for reading books, particularly books telling stories about travelling throughout the world. This habit formed when I received my first book as a present from my father on birthday. It was him who cultivated my passion for the world of letters by encouraging me to read a page of a book everyday. Moreover, through those books, I have gradually discovered the various beauty of countries, which inspired me the dream of studying abroad.
I started learning English and considered it as a tool to fulfil my objective to study in a foreign country. It is prominent that English is an international language. Therefore, being fluent in English would offer me more chances to enter the university that I have desired. Furthermore, I devote time to studying English with a view to gaining abundant knowledge from the Internet. In the era of information explosion, there is no doubt that who is capable of taking advantage of online resources will be the winner. On that account, to be successful in studying this language would broaden my knowledge in a diverse range of fields, and thus give me vital skills in readiness for later life.
In conclusion, I am absorbed in English, and I aspire to master this world-wide language in order to assist my study and life in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86923076923 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87936958912 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1330383466 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3846153846 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161838037897 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639954560478 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611719863853 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106736701845 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510003136424 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.