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The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Indonesia from 1960 to 2000
The line chart compares the percentages of per 1000 males and female smokers in Indonesia during 1960 up to 2000. As is presented, the tendency to avoid smoking is gradually increased among males in the given period while females declined.
To describe, the number of smoking males begin to slide from 60 percent of the population in the initial to nearly 20 percent in the end of period. Appositely, the smoking habits, which was a taboo among females in the early 19, rapidly uplifted in the first two decades before it experienced a slight drop since 1970, from approximately one-third of the population to 200 smoking females in the beginning of 20 century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
... smoking females in the beginning of 20 century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 552.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 113.0 196.424390244 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88495575221 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69454131562 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 173.7 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3931187117 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184474570236 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109162949489 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776668054999 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14481741706 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046000198555 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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