Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits.
Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why?
Over the years people have recognized the need to encounter changes for evolutionary development. Numerous individuals are eager to experience new things breaking the habitual ways of living, while the others adhere to stability and the vast level of certainty. I prefer an approach with changes and transformations to attain the best quality of living.
It is commonly known, that the similar life patterns along the usual ways of doing are a kind of equilibrium behavior, which a tranquil individual strives to achieve. I would call it the lowest resistance way – safety way of living with a modest emotional experience. In particular, a stable life does not demand for the higher level of energy, there are no many obstacles to overcome. That is why many individuals are to choose that approach for a long term.
However, during the evolution mankind had encountered different changes or shocks such as natural disasters, revolutions, scientific discoveries which shaped its development to the modern state. Without shifts, people were still living in prehistorical caves on restricted area and limited communications. Those who possessed bravery and courage to deal with alterations were benefited with better houses, power, fame and even life. In my view, that benefits are better motivators to overcome changes rather than joy of changes itself.
To summarize, I would say, whilst some individuals enjoy the process and life stability as the best way of living, there are people to jeopardize their life enhancement through the range of changes and experiments. The latter ones, in my view, have more chances to move evolution and development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, while, in particular, kind of, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30798479087 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94682448125 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7206420181 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183911996535 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573871018561 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042847101722 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103242069894 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207585244288 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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