The 15 to 18 yr old children are enthusiastic, If they decide something they can do anything then they give their 100% to complete their wish. But it is always better for them that parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions.
Teenagers can get easily influenced by their surroundings. For example, John and tony are teenagers from same class. John is good at sports and tony is good in painting. If John is going to attain karate classes to earn black belt then suddenly tony will also wish for the same. Its because of influence of his classmate. But actually Tony is not capable of attaining Karate classes. If John takes his decisions he will attain karate classes and he will forget about his mastery in painting. If Tony's parents send him to art classes instead of Karate over the time Tony will forget about Karate and he will start to take his interest in painting. Parents never get influenced by surrounding. They are capable of taking right decision.
The teenage is said to be vulnerable because of making or breaking can happen in this age. Right decisions can give better future to child and wrong one can destroy his life. If a child starts to out for parties late night and accidentally he starts to get drugs then his life will be destroyed. In many countries the large number drug addicts are teenagers. So if child is ready to listen his parents then the possible dangers can be avoided. Teenagers must listen to parents as they don't experience of this changing world. There are many distractions for child. By using experience and knowledge parents can take wright decisions for their child.
Sometimes child gets confused about his own interests so decisions like choosing school,classes and where to go should taken by parents. But some parents tend to force child to behave as per their wish. In such cases child should take his decisions for his good future.
for their teenage children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81137724551 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49199838203 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51497005988 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0891142204 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9583333333 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17896474146 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631958719348 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740885997937 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155671630148 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931165142058 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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