In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.What problems will this cause for individuals and society?Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.
What problems will this cause for individuals and society?
Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

The rapidly increasing speed of median longevity is causing the emergence of serious issues for modern society in recent development. Despite this certain consequence of improved living conditions and medical technologies, the government can consider several actions to diminish population ageing impacts on a large scale.

One of the most significant effects of higher life expectancy is the enormous burden on the welfare system as the number of beneficiaries overwhelms the working force productivity limit. Physically weakened elderly required a large budget in nursing home and healthcare in comparison to the deficient start-up investment for the youngsters as well as putting a strain on the following generation because of their reliance on the younger ones support. An alternative influence is the escalation in population density, especially in metropolitan areas and urbanized regions, result in a stressful lifestyle and deprived living quality.

There are several solutions to the problems described above. Firstly, expand the limit of retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70, in this age worker are well equipped with real-life experiences and are able to carry through working difficulties. The second measure would be taken more money from national budgets from other areas to spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens. The final step is to invest in the younger generation in order to found a sustainable basis for the future society operation.

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56589147287 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00804162275 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635658914729 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4080146542 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.6 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194644008104 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066350727919 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361074998158 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110833069767 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435129767034 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.24 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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