There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.
Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:
• Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
• Say what happened the last times you complained
• Explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir,
I am John and member of your sports club. I am writing an epistle about problem of changing room.Last sunday I visited there and I found that door of changing room is not working well.Sometime it do not shut and lock properly.Many times key of lock is stuck in and do not do work. I faced this problem many times.
After swimming when I went to changing room, door of this room did not shut properly and other person came and opened the door.I felt very embrace in front of him. I complained about it to supervisor but he did not get me response properly. he told me don't give any suggestion.I will see it. but he did not care of it.
I ask to you please resolve this problem because our club has reputed and old club in our city. it is very famous for its facilities but now due to these reasons we are loosing our reputation.I humbly request please solve these problem as soon as possible sothat People do not feel embrace to others. I look forward your response.
Thanking you.
Your Sincerely,
Raj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Last
... epistle about problem of changing room.Last sunday I visited there and I found that...
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Suggestion: Sometime
...or of changing room is not working well.Sometime it do not shut and lock properly.Many t...
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Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...ng room is not working well.Sometime it do not shut and lock properly.Many times k...
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Suggestion: Many
...metime it do not shut and lock properly.Many times key of lock is stuck in and do no...
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...em many times. After swimming when I went to changing room, door of this room...
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...d other person came and opened the door.I felt very embrace in front of him. I co...
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...ut he did not get me response properly. he told me dont give any suggestion.I will...
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Suggestion: I
...e reasons we are loosing our reputation.I humbly request please solve these probl...
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Line 6, column 223, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...eputation.I humbly request please solve these problem as soon as possible sothat People do no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43915343915 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42561288824 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.657003514 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2727272727 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193391116556 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620814453594 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457330593254 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111364153226 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574311451932 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.