It is hard for youngsters to get better advice from peers but old generations. I am unsure whether this is true or false, I tend to agree it, therefore, examine the both ideas and give my final answer in this essay.
First and foremost, the journey of life will fulfil wisdom and knowledge while people are getting older. Young fellows always can get some useful advices from old people who found answers already, especially the experiences that old citizens confronted and solved it. Another significant reasons in favour is that old man understood time is crucial in human life. The advices that old people gave is more related about how to spend vital time on most important parts. Last but not least argument relates to the idea is old generations are able to find the advantages or disadvantages of young people, and suggest in right way.
People would like to give easy and simple suggestion if the advices from same ages people. That opinion comes with reckless consideration normally. Given quick fun answers, young people are more likely to take everything ease. It is rare for young generations to consider a wide range of the situation that people are worrying and suffering. For instance, if a young people are likely to start a business, maybe an opinion from the peer is do it anyway. The advices from old people would share pervious ideas and ask the young man to fully considering the whole idea with any relevant case study and data that young people could collect it .
In conclusion, I believe young people ought to ask more opinion from old generation rather that their peers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83636363636 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46722902699 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0445780254 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166284303637 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644942330677 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648739131177 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102005459502 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235633803989 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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