Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to express my disagreement with your decision about closing the sport and leisure center in Mississauga. This community center lately has been a goto area for most of the residents of Mississauga. Let me explain how this center has been useful for all of us.
Firstly, as this center is equipped with just not only a range of sports namely: swimming, table tennis, fitness area, rock climbing spaces, but also facilitates classes like yoga, Zumba, and Bollywood dance, it is engaging the time of most of the homemakers like me to keep our selves fit by taking part in some of these activities. Secondly, for kids, it has been used as the best playground which in turn keeps them off the screen at home and lastly, for the elderly as a walking space during the early and late hours. In the city like Mississauga, especially in winters, our center has helped us to socialize with unknown people around and has been a great place to hang out.
If this center is closed, it would disturb all of our fitness regimes that have been built all these years and kids would be stuck to the screens at home in winters, which would affect their mental health as the body is not active and the mind is stagnant on screens. On the whole, it generates turmoil and adds to our depression. If the reason for the closure is to save some cost, please consider increasing the membership fee or organize some shows for the cost which I am sure would be a hit if introduced.
I hope you consider the seriousness of the center usage and think about other better options to save the cost.
Yours faithfully,
Jannet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 292.0 206.0 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6095890411 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42649395077 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.3209773572 44.8134815571 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.363636364 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179152648019 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815526877178 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642067460552 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121018761216 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767632768601 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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