You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job . you think he/she shou;g get a job.
Dear Sarah
i am sorry i haven't written to you for so long. my work keeps me busy that, i never get a minute to myself. i am writing to you to offer some advice regarding the next step in your career.
I feel getting a job is better idea in the current situation. I have known you for so long that i never saw you enjoying the classes and writing the exam. Therefore , it is good to get a job which will support you financially.
As you are the first child in your family by doing job in this current scenario you can financial help for your younger's brother education. Now that, you have completed your bachelor in technology and doing master is not important as both are being paid equal salaries.
I think you can apply for software related jobs in IT companies because during school days you were much interested in coding and you also have good command over english which is one of the requirement of multinational companies. Thus, this job can offer you satisfaction and bright future in this field.
I hope my suggestion is helpful for you to decide what is best for you.
your regards
Rahul
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... you to decide what is best for you. your regards Rahul
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, regarding, so, therefore, thus, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50738916256 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45436530969 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605911330049 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4783530558 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315858463257 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123377492789 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631206833816 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193609203072 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542084824925 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.