In the present day scenario,Young people are the one who brings the difference to the society and they are the future. So, there need to be appropriate measures which are to be successfully instilled in them to cherish there future with excellence. In this context i would be likely to agree with the author that the cooperation among individuals is the best way to prepare the young minds for leadership for the following reasons.
Firstly, in this modern era we are lacking in cooperation in between the different individuals this is because right from the childhood we are trained to be competitive.For example, consider a student who had just completed his Schooling and he is ready to pursue his intermediate. In this present day life he is motivated with a lot of competitive minds and falls in to a colleges like Narayana and chaitanya colleges which are stress busters for the students and always exhorts and pressurizes its students to move in to the competitive world. Eventually there mindsets get addicted to those thoughts and face some sporadic mindset problems in future and also cannot cooperate with others.
secondly, there are some major projects where it comes to the industries (including private,government and other sector also) in which most of the individuals lacks cooperation in forming a team and will not perform there tasks as a team. They are motivated by competition in the present day world. so they develop a serious egos among the individuals and lack the cooperation between the individuals.
There are some other circumstances which also play a vital role for which the competition is also needed in the present scenario. But i disagree with that because with the lack of cooperation between the minds for the leadership qualities, there is no use to have the competitive spirit. A true leader has the freindly competitive spirit with involves in the cooperation between the individuals.
Finally,i would conclude that cooperation is the best way to prepare young minds for leadership right from there childhood,so that they indulge those qualities and become successful in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12391930836 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01305064684 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478386167147 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7285292768 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.769230769 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170478159764 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659738966038 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061958080704 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1113949788 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643596142668 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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