Dear Alex,
I hope you and your family are well. First of all, thank you so much for the invitation to Anne's 8th birthday party. I am so thrilled to know that she is already turning 8 and growing up so fast. I wish her happy birthday and best in her life.
However, I am afraid and terribly sorry that I will not be able to attend her special day. As you know, I am attending a conference in Singapore that week, I have registered for this event almost a month ago, and luckily I was selected. This conference is on Data Analytics which is a crucial topic nowadays. I am anticipating to gain more knowledge and enhance my skills so I can apply for the Data Analyst job position in my company which is highly paid and have aspects of growth. Unfortunately, I will not be able to postpone it.
Although, I am planning to be in your town next month and I am hoping that I can meet you and your family during my trip. Please let me know when you have some time off also convey my apologies to Anne and let her know that I owe her a birthday present.
Yours faithfully
Dave
- The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer. 56
- Some people think that genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 67
- Nowadays, more and more foreign students are going to English-Speaking countries to learn the “international language – English". It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English-speaking country is the best way, but it is not the only way t 67
- rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects like philosophy and history and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment To wh 74
- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion on this? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, you know, first of all, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26086956522 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44519856233 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584541062802 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8357889046 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191892528425 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707189061413 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638024961536 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136088177861 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531264631848 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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