Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey amd resist unjust laws.
As the world moved from Monarch to Democracy,there was a need of set of rules under which the society will cherish known as Laws.Laws were established with a goal of societal harmony.Laws were made to protect us from crime,secure our rights and ensure a peaceful society.Laws are what make the world a better place.Most of the laws that exist today were made way back.With the course of time some laws may need some changes achieved by making"Law Amendments".Some laws with time may make no sense.For example:Recent decriminalization of the Section-377 which made sexual activities "against the order of nature" illegal.This was an unjust law.After many protests and years of fighting for their rights LGBT community got the freedom to love.Unjust laws all around the world are frond upon and protests are held to bring government's attention to the respective laws.The soul purpose of laws were to protect an individual from injustice and crime but if it harms the society in any way it needs amendedment or even abloishment.Protests, rallies and marches are a famous way of protesting against the unjust laws.With the course of time even a house needs repainting,the laws too,need revision.Laws were made to be obeyed,however if they start endangering an individual's rights ,one may resist them.We can rely on our judicial system and the government to protect our rights and make the various law amendments which may be needed with time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23504273504 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47154036698 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 234.0 23.0359550562 1016% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1225.0 118.986275619 1030% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 234.0 23.4991977007 996% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.0 5.21951772744 728% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185590669207 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185590669207 0.0831039109588 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185590669207 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 120.3 14.1392134831 851% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -166.03 48.8420337079 -340% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 94.6 12.1743820225 777% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.29 8.38706741573 230% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 11.8971910112 538% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 95.6 11.2143820225 852% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 95.0 11.7820224719 806% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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