The table below gives information about past and projected population figures in various countries for different years.summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant

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The table below gives information about past and projected population figures in various countries for different years.summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant

The graph illustrates data of ppl from four different countries namely australia, Canada, new Zealand and US from 1990 to 2050.

It is clear that the figures for ppl from four different countries increased the past and will increase in the future.

In 1990, the number of americans stood at 249,4 millions while the figures for Canadians was 26,6 millions. At the same time the figures for Australians and new Zealanders made up 17,1 millions and 3,4 millions respectively. From 1993 to 2000, the number of ppl in four countries has a slight increase and their order had no change. At 275, 1 millions, the number of US’ s ppl made up highest while the figures for new Zealanders was lowest, only 3.8 millions in 2000. For the moment, the number of Canadians and australis was 31 millions and 19,2 millions respectively.

In the future, the figures for ppl in four counties still continue to increase. The number of americans will be 349 millions in 2050. Although there will be an increase, the number of new Zealanders will make up only 4,7 millions in 2050. In addition, the figures for australia and Canadians will be 26 millions and 39 millions respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85572139303 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69570952264 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467661691542 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1829358884 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.7272727273 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098825504584 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050783963885 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358403560631 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798641121412 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395476757378 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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