Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town.
Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain why you think the decision is wrong
say what you think the council should do instead
Dear Sir,
My name is John Carberry and I live at sector - 40, Gurgaon since 2010. As, I have been residing in this sector for quite a long time, I know about each and every places of this area such as parks, market and community center. I am an engineer by profession and works with an information technology multinational company which is location in New Delhi.
Last month, I was informed by my neighbors that local authorities have taken decision to replace a public family park with a car parking area. I personally believe that the public parks are more important, because it provides us fresh oxygen and peaceful place to spend some quality time. Moreover, it gives opportunity to children and elders to meet and greet people from different cultures. Thus, it seems to be a wrong decision to close the public park.
I would like to request you to reverse this decision of closing the public park, you should raise awareness about not to buy new cars instead. By doing this, number of cars in our locality will not rise and there would be less vehicles and less noise pollution. Please take an action immediately to stop park removal.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Jay Larosa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vehicles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...cality will not rise and there would be less vehicles and less noise pollution. Plea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75576036866 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49829501662 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695852534562 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5675020456 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235202263923 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738394420426 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432297379251 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104052575157 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573271637969 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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