First of all, the position of women is better improved, this allows women to contribute much more to the socio-economic development. It is clearly that, there are number of well-educated women who have well-trained in the universities and have high professional skills, they should be created opportunities to devote their talent to society. It would be unequal if skilled employees are not explointed in the working places. As a result, this would lead to the loss of talented workers, even excellent researchers. Moreover, women have the right to participate in all the fields of the society under provision of the treaty which has been agreed by many countries.
Another reason is that women are being regarded as breadwinner as well as economic provoder in the family. It may be true that women do not still do housework, they enter into the labour market to search for appropriate jobs to make money. This means that women are independent on men relating finacial issue, so women could make great decisions in the family because they have money via a steady income. What is more, having income, women enjoy cultural as well as material life in away of going to theatres, concerts and nightlife. Therefore, the women’s mind would be broadened thanks to these interesting activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08920187793 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88285084251 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657276995305 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9579490773 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15117660373 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059447122665 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469560360955 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122141133783 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00133693618599 0.056905535591 2% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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