the sales made by a coffee shop in a office building on a typical weekday

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the sales made by a coffee shop in a office building on a typical weekday

The table shows a typical weekday's sales made by a coffee shop that is located inside an office building. Overall, it can be seen that employees purchase more coffee than tea throughout the day, pastries are bought in larger quantity during the morning and afternoon, and sandwiches are widely chosen at lunchtime.
Analyzing the coffee shop's sales report, it emerges that 265 people choose a cup of coffee in the early hours of the morning, from 7:30 to 10:30, while more than half of cups of tea are purchased. Pastries, however, during the same time, are purchased 275 times, more than five times the amount of sandwiches bought. In the late morning hours and during lunchtime, between 10:30 and 14:30, the sales' report changes a little, with a positive shift toward the number of sandwiches sold, that rises up to 200, compared to the number of pastries that decreases to 95. During this period, coffee is sold three times more than tea, 185 cups to 50 cups.
In the afternoon, until 5:30, 145 people buy coffee and 150 choose pastries, with only 35 and 40 purchases for tea and sandwiches respectively. Finally, from 5:30 to 8:30, the amount of salty snacks rises again to 110, but coffee remains the first choice, with 200 cups bought. Tea and pastries are chosen 75 and 80 times during this period of the day.
All 4 different categories' sales vary during the day, but coffee and pastries are indeed people's fist choices throughout the entire workday.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80158730159 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33635480865 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1304056073 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203902847853 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992192039397 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152298370033 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143418549503 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107165487528 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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