A successful person is one who earns a lot of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that collecting lots of money is a main factor of being a successful individual. however, I completely disagree with this belief, as I wholeheartedly think that success is a fruit of combination of several factors as well as there are a plethora of examples for some successful people who were very poor but left a conspicuous great mark on worldwide communities. This essay aims to explore such a debatable issue in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that money is playing a crucial role in making the success. For example, money give the power and leverage for their holders to meet many impossible thinks such as nominating to very high governmental position. Donald Trump the president of the USA as an example, is a well-known businessmen, he has no experience in political field. however, by his financial ability, he managed to done very impressive campaigns that cost a chunk of money to become the president of the strongest nation. On the flip side, others might exploit money illegally by providing and providing bribes to do illegal activities which might affect the economy of their countries.
In contrast, regular people can still be prosperous. As the success will never be managed by merely money that people gain. individuals indeed might be successful in different fields such as education, healthcare, engineering and so on. For instance, the pupils who spent most of their times studying very hard and achieving high scores afterwards, deserved to be called as successful individuals. Moreover, employees who have ambitious and passions with integrity work to fulfill their companies goals are being merit to called a successful workers. Scientists for example who spent a huge effort to produce some medications to overcome a plethora of diseases should also be called as a successful members.
To sum up, earning money does not always mean the success, might these money coming from corruption. however, people can be successful without money in plenty of different areas such like education, healthcare and many other fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...actor of being a successful individual. however, I completely disagree with this belief...
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Suggestion: many impossibles
... and leverage for their holders to meet many impossible thinks such as nominating to very high ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...regular people can still be prosperous. As the success will never be managed by me...
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...naged by merely money that people gain. individuals indeed might be successful in different...
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... are being merit to called a successful workers. Scientists for example who spent a hug...
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Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8801502913 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.880374409 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196474987981 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667571879803 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477114232493 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125803538564 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266794160874 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.