A nation should introduce the same study curriculum for every student in school before they enter college
The topic is very timely to disscuss. Because, it is highly relevent to a nations future since it is concerned with the education.
when considering a country like sri lanka it is important to have a common curriculum all over the country in order to maintain the fairness in the free education provided and enhance the crosscultural harmony. since sri lanka is a multicultural nation it is a must to construct the trust among sinhalese, Tamils and muslims. Although there is a language barrier, the fairness will strengthen the trustworthiness among them. there is a recent issue that sinhalese complained about the muslims having different curriculum for their own curriculum called 'Madrasa' and which lead to an ethnic crisis within the country. therefore government intervenement to have a commom platform for the education is recommended for the countries like sri lanka.
However, when implementing such common platform will be much more complicated and challanging. In the case of sri lanka there are different categories of educational institutes such as public schools, semi-government schools, private schools and 'Piriven' for buddhist monks. Creating and implementing a national curriculum will be a hard task even for the small country like sri lanka. therefore, it is obviously become much more idealistic solution for a country like India which have huge amount of different ethnics and cultural variations.
According to my point, implementing a common national curriculum will be defenitely going to be advantageous to the young generation and hence for the nation since it ensures the fairness and equality. However, implementing such a program will be time consuming, costly and much more complex. For developing countries they can achieve suboptimal situations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 277.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47292418773 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10984376723 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4765649077 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140597971646 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512349308542 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427824098901 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870757379159 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302354109298 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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