Most of the nations encounter massive complications due to the rapid increase in the elderly population. To address such issues various actions have been suggested and implemented by some societies. Involvement of elderly people in a career is considered as one solution leading to overcome a range of problems. The question is whether or not such development cause many problems than positive consequences.
Certainly, at present, the retirement age is decided as 60 by most of the countries since they believe that people would not be able to work actively after that age. If people are permitted to engage in office duties after 60 years of age, it would be disadvantageous for the organization. That is because of the less efficiency of older employees. As a result, the productivity of the company would be negatively affected. Not only the organizations, but also the individuals would experience difficulties due to workloads that is unbearable for their physical strength. It will further resulted with terrible health issues. Moreover, older generation need a lot of relaxation time to become more healthier. A job will not allow them to enjoy a considerable time to be in leisure.
On the other hand, a handful of experience owned by elderly people would definitely be an asset to any kind of a business. In some cases, businesses operated by older communities can found more successful than that of highly qualified young professionals. Furthermore, since a job provides an income opportunity, the elderly can cope by themselves instead of becoming a burden to their children. Last but not least, older people can enjoy the latter part of their life by being among the workforce while contributing the nation through their employment. It will further prevent this group being isolated in the society.
In conclusion, every nation have a responsibility to take care of the elderly community. If a person is capable enough in continuing his career even after 60 years of his life, that should not be demotivated. However, actions of all means should be undertaken to minimize the problems that could be arise under such circumstance.
- You are relocating to a new city. Write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.When and why you are relocating?What kind of house do you want? 73
- Some people believe that employment over the age of 60 is not right and creates lots of problems. So people should retire after 60 and not work.agree/disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...me a range of problems. The question is whether or not such development cause many problems th...
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Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...heir physical strength. It will further resulted with terrible health issues. Moreover, ...
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Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...need a lot of relaxation time to become more healthier. A job will not allow them to enjoy a c...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...ple would definitely be an asset to any kind of a business. In some cases, businesses ope...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on have a responsibility to take care of the elderly community. If a person is ca...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons of all means should be undertaken to minimize the problems that could be aris...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16618911175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08891026989 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573065902579 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1214881349 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.15 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182871496701 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464180648497 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756756901402 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981967419676 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540096355288 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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