Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to request your assistance to search a suitable accommodation for me and my family.
I am currently living in Bahama and I got a new job in Sydney. Since, I have to accept the duties on the position by next Friday, I am looking for a house for rent there. I would prefer a house close to the city center due to the convenience.
I expect a three bedroom house with a kitchen, pantry and a large living room. A furnished house is preferred, as I do not have much time to rearrange everything. There should be a garage attached to the house, which can easily be occupied by two vehicles. In addition to that, I am interested to have a large garden where I can arrange a small get together.
I would be grateful if you could suggest me few options which go inline with my requirements, as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you.
Thank You
Yours faithfully,
Hasanthi Gray
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'suitable accommodation'.
Suggestion: suitable accommodation
...ng to request your assistance to search a suitable accommodation for me and my family. I am currently...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45614035088 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71765655028 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7097595387 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.2727272727 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22980842182 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081020659658 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573313352461 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107387146005 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293850071019 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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