As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A renowned surgeon is helpless if he does not have access to medical equipment such as lasers , MRI machines , surgical robots and the like. It does not mean that he is deteriorating as a surgeon day after day , he continues to attend conferences on latest breakthroughs , periodically revises the concepts taught at medical school and is only a better version of himself . Technology has not been harmful for him at all , and neither he is less skilled at solving complex problems either.
By utilising technology , we can invest ourselves to the domains where technology cannot help us achieve the desired goals. Humans have evolved throughout the century only because they never want to stop inventing and fulfilling revolutionary ideas. Today , most of the monotonous work including data entry , scraping through huge amounts of data are being performed by technology . If a human were to do this work , it would only result in the wastage of the precious human brain power. Various domains including big data , machine learning , stem cell studies are being done solely by humans as these branches require brain and skills which cannot be matched by machines , atleast for now. Although there may be instances where one does excessively rely on technology for doing their work , these cases constitute a small proportion and may not be given much importance to.
There are certain things that humans simply cannot do without technology. Tracking the foraging habits of animals , studying the effects of psychiatric disorders on the human brain using CT scans and doing massive calculations where a single error can cost billions of dollars are a few cases where we should allow technology . Though these activities does require humans at various stages , it is certain that they are using their knowledge and skill and are not deteriorating their skills. Humans dealing in such technologies need to regularly solve complex problems beyond the reach of machines .
It is wise to say that technology is empowering the people not only to solve problems but also to become adept in reaching new heights . Smartphones today help solve numerous problems of communication which have bugged humans for ages. Though a naive person might think that these are used specifically for entertainment , the reality is a lot different. Smartphones are being used to communicate with fellow physicians , teachers , researchers and enable a conducive way for the like minded to interact and increase their understanding of the domain.
It is safe to say that ,widespread use of technology is not deteriorating our abilities to think for ourselves. In fact , it is only increasing our acumen to grasp new concepts and conquer more problems .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 2260.96107784 101% => OK
No of words: 438.0 441.139720559 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19634703196 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86502199309 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 204.123752495 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552511415525 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 705.55239521 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1175269407 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.789473684 119.503703932 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0526315789 23.324526521 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.10526315789 5.70786347227 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.25449101796 552% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168913078498 0.218282227539 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556450341041 0.0743258471296 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386077596962 0.0701772020484 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994390987346 0.128457276422 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436928001657 0.0628817314937 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32208582834 110% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 98.500998004 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.