Dear Sir,
I saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in The Great Himalayan National Park. I am very excited to saw you planning to go there for a week, I have been looking for trekking in the Himalayas for long. The Great Himalayan National Park is a fabulous place for nature lovers like me and this place is very mesmerize trekking routes. The main reason for my interest in this trip because last time I missed out when I went to Manali due to lack of time.
I would like to ask for information about the exact dates and prices for this tour. Although I have no issues with the budget it will give me the idea of expenditure. I have one concern about my fitness level can you please tell me what kind of trekking you are offering. I slipped off the wet turf one month ago and my right leg injured, however, the injury was not much serious but the doctor advised me to take rest for a couple of weeks. Now you please suggest me can I go with you on this tour. I will look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Bhanu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e exact dates and prices for this tour. Although I have no issues with the budget it wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, as for, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22959637603 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5273730868 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0909090909 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275126954567 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107214311187 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831738219563 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21135256932 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194741790852 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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