People sleep less than before in many countries.
Why do people sleep less?
What effect does it have on an individual and on society?
In several nations, as compared to the past, sleep deprivation has become a common issue among people. This essay will argue that the main reason for this behaviour is excessive screen time and increased workload which ultimately gives rise to many life-threatening conditions and later it has a wide impact on society.
Firstly, the lack of sleep is mainly due to an increase in working hours. This is to say that in this contemporary era, people are working hard to make both ends meet, thus many individuals bring office work to home and awake till late hours to finish their work. Hence, the number of hours they get to sleep is reduced. Secondly, many people are glued to their mobile phones and laptops, they spend many hours socializing with their friends and family. For illustration, In the Daily Times of Pakistan, the survey-based report reveals that many people like to socialize at night.
On the other hand, on a personal level, the late-night awakening has drastic effects on health causing many diseases like insomnia, migraine, depression and high blood pressure. Those who do not get adequate sleep are more prone to these ailments, therefore have a bad impact on society. When a person does not take enough sleep it results in lack of concentration which can lead to much serious life-threatening condition. For instance, many road accidents are reported in which drivers fall asleep during driving due to which other family members and people on the road suffer a lot.
To conclude, late-night awakening is increased among serval individuals in many countries because of excessive use of electronic devices and increase in working hours, which cause several illnesses to the individual which eventually leads to several social issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...therefore have a bad impact on society. When a person does not take enough sleep it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71313676602 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2261595193 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203595289534 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075272393065 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266807256445 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108837329816 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569845297709 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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