Over- reliance on modern technology means that people are failing to learn, or are forgetting many basic to skills.
To what extent is this true? Are people becoming so reliant on modern technology that they are no longer able to do some things without it?
Nowadays, with the accelerating development of technology, human is becoming more and more dependent on technology, which means that there is a controversy showing people do not know how to grasp fundamental skills hence modernized technology has already helped us to do this. I strongly deny this statement.
On the one hand, technology is one of the most powerful assistance in our daily lives. We need technology to comfort our works, our household chores and so on. Technology helps us to easily communicate with everyone, identify the road and automatically do mathematics. For example, you are on the road and do not know how to get the direction instantly, google maps can do this job much better than the usual maps obviously by activating satellites and 3D animation, which can help people to identify the direction as swift as it can.
On the other hand, without technology’s convenience, the human can do everything that keeps them alive. In the last decade when technology is not substantially used, we still have a satisfactory existence by doing stuff by our own mind. Human is born to be the most intelligent creature on Earth and we are supposed to survive in every situation. That is the reason why if technology disappears, people will still have a wonderful life. For instance, without google map, everyone will need help from papery maps or the direction of the locals. Without calculators, people still can do operations by ourselves with the principles which we were taught in junior schools. Without social network which includes facebook, instagram, facetime, and emails, people also send and receive information by letters. People never forget primary skills, they just get used to absorbing experiences and skills with technology’s support.
In conclusion, technology has played an important role in our daily life but it does not mean that people disremember the critical abilities to stay alive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20766773163 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04598702066 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6997784862 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254230305253 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08338477891 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481861991548 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153981356933 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369918531079 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.