Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in
easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It has been argued for decades that common world competitions such as football world cup and international athletic ceremonies are crucial in alleviating international pressure and upholding a nationalistic spirit in a harmless manner. However, I strongly believe that there are convincing points why this fact is wrong and has been extended too far.
At first, such events are competitive and create discord as well as chaos between the winning and lossing nations. International athletics can either end with a loss or win and a victor and vanquished. The nation that has been so unfortunate in lossing might therefore become embittered and engrieved, become violent and cause harm to the opponent.such condition could deteriorate to a catastrophic scale and worsen relation between nations. The effect is that countries would become long term foes and this would not encourage national peace keeping negotiations. As an example the vicious relationship between Germany and England stemmed from the conflict that arose when England beat Germany woefully in the Atlantic 1996 games.
Also international athletic competitions worsen the economy and lifestyle condition of the host country thereby citizens wallow in penury. During the period of such world sports events, the incidence of crime abounds as there are influx of people from all continents of the world coming to watch the games. Countries limited resources like social amenities, food and shelter are also exhausted , social insecurity is heightened as the foreigners might have conflicting and ulterior motives. Such breakdown in countries economical and social conditions could make the citizens become less faithful to its country and lose the spirit of comradeship.
In conclusion, though it is a popular belief that intercontinental sporting events play a pertinent role in improving international relationship and creating a patriotic emotion, I believe that the evils that emanate from such ceremonies far surpass any positive effect it could ever have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
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Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55483870968 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0068246041 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
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Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Essay readability:
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smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
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linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
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What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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