Some people believe that government should make investment in building public libraries in every town while others think it is a weste of money because we have access to information via internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion
people throughout the world places are giving their opinions about old public libraries which localed in every town. it is argument among the messes, authorities should expenditure on the old buildings according to some folks. Meanwhile, the thinking of other residents, it is waste of money. However, I am a strong advocate of formal approach and the benefits of it will be covered in this essay.
A fundamental reason for this is that if government will spend money on the old building libraries than the attraction of buildings will expand which will give the benefits to old people who will seat together and acquire the knowledge from the booking who do not wanna to use internet. For example, In the rural areas, most of the old people do not have proper skills of using internet so internet is vulnerable for them.
Moreover, some students who are belong to poor families unable use the internet because they do not have enough money for using the internet who are only hand to mouth that's why, these public libraries will give the benefits to them, which is more and more indispensable for the students.
There is no doubt, internet is best source to get the knowledge but if anyone want to use it first he/she have to buy smart phone or computer which are so exorbitant to them who have not enough money for buy these sources. Therefore, it is not a waste of money government should expenditure on these buildings it is so necessary for our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73046875 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53616120297 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5234375 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7485449601 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.555555556 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229897929804 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105420725796 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052058126002 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148687528757 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396901879504 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.