Some people that government should make investment in building public libraries in every town while other thinks it's a waste of money because we have assess to information via internet discuss both views and give your opinion
there is no doubt, internet plays an indispensable role in our life. it is argument among the masses, spending money on public libraries in town is still unecessity thing.Oponent say that government should expenditure on library in cities is better for the citizens.both these views will be discuss carefully
To begin with folks who are supporting the notion of govt should not spend amount on public libraries because in the contemporary era people can enhance knowledge through the internet. there are multifarious are available on the internet which help to acquire knowledge regularly any particular subjects.firstly candidate can get information from the net about their study which is more beneficial to them l.
However the people who believe that authorities should spend money only libraries is crucial in the town because this practice is more beneficial for the residents.First and foremost is that old people always prefer to spend their time at quite places and get the knowledge about their traditional and surrounding throughout the libraries. Moreover some students who belongs to poor families are unable to buy smart phone and computer be use the internet so they can study there. furthermore, with the investment on the library buildings the town will be developed and it will be easy to citizens acquire the knowledge through out the libraries.
to sum up, in my opinion, even though, internet is crucial and plays an important role in our life, the benefits of public libraries are far more than internet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, no doubt, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2024291498 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92335167549 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562753036437 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.439179145 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.571428571 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2857142857 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229882240588 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09292059297 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663737490991 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138149872403 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346052199712 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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