Some people think that children should obey rules and listen to their parents and teachers, while others think less controlling will help children deal with the adult’s life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The issue of whether our next generations should obey rules and instructions from others is a great concern to the parents and educational authorities. While some people claim that children should be obedient to certain principals, others believe that less parental and school control is beneficial to children’s future development. These two views will be discussed in this essay.
On one hand, some people tend to hold the view that rules are necessary to the development of the offspring since they bring a number of benefits. For one thing, some useful skills can be cultivated provided that...
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long-time exposure to TV and video game that glorify violence make children behave aggressively in school.
long-time exposure to TV and video game that glorify violence makes children behave aggressively in school.
Sentence: On the other hand, others claim that what children need is freedom rather than rules and restrictions.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to children and need
as it offer positive influences on their lives,
as it offers positive influences on their lives,
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Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 356 350
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No. of Different Words: 207 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.344 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.213 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.793 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.52 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
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