Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
-Someone who is quiet
-someone who we are similar to
-someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer
Life is changing quickly and the population ratio increased drastically. In this modern society it becomes very rare to have a neighbors who is supportive and encouraged. In my opinion, the supportive neighbor is the best to have because they can be able to help us when we need and we can have a very strong friendship relation with them as I will explain in this essay.
To begin with, no one can deny how supportive neighbor can influence our-life positively to success. Individual today having a hard time to cope with their neighbors in same environment they lived. By time, the neighborhood relation diminished severely. Besides, supportive neighbor who’s get our back when needed is the most important element to have a happy and healthy life. Talking about my neighbor as an example, I do still remember the last couple of weeks when I struggled to get a high score in Toefl test, I got the support from my neighbor who’s in fact an English teacher when she got my back for pushing me to meet a high score. Consequently, she gave me a variety of subjects to practice on and many strategies to follow during the test also, she sent me a lot of videos to watch and subscribe. As a result, I invest my time and energy to make her proud of me and get a high score.
Secondly, strong bond-relation between people can enhance the society especially in this modern life which everything is luxurious we lived. People in recent decays don’t have enough time to spend chatting, talking or even knowing the neighbor next to their door like in the past so; none of them can trust their neighbors. In contrast to my family who’s considering their neighbor as a members belong to the family itself, they are going outside together, attending some parties, and doing many activities like fishing, hacking, and running. Like for instance, my mom lost more than twenty pounds because of her neighbor and friend at the same time. The encouragement she got allows her to be motivated and healthier. Hence, I like to visit my parent each weekend about four hours a day, eating meditarian food, hangout with their neighbor who’s always trustworthy. Moreover, my kid learns how to speak Arabic which it is his native language from our neighbors’ kid and learning plays a significant role these days which impact my kids’ life positively.
To put it in a brief, making friends whose can trust and love is not an easy issue these days therefore, I strongly agree supportive neighbor is the best to have because they can offer the help, and we can build a strong friend-ship relations with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a neighbor' or simply 'neighbors'?
Suggestion: a neighbor; neighbors
...rn society it becomes very rare to have a neighbors who is supportive and encouraged. In my...
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Line 2, column 626, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...teacher when she got my back for pushing me to meet a high score. Consequently, s...
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Line 4, column 396, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a member' or simply 'members'?
Suggestion: a member; members
...ho's considering their neighbor as a members belong to the family itself, they are g...
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Line 6, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
... to have because they can offer the help, and we can build a strong friend-ship ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in contrast, in fact, talking about, as a result, in contrast to, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8185840708 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75490364391 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54203539823 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0817620093 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183650542337 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634266004289 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060253527514 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127865911362 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487064581304 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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