People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our life generally more confortable but it is a pity traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
The modern era of cutting- edge technology and globalisation has changed the way of living and contributed to make the life more peaceful and luxuries. Some people opine that in today' s world community has to spend hard time on work to buy new product and services that has make life easier but on the same way it has harmful effect on the ancestral values of society.I partially agree with the notion and will explain my viewpoint in forthcoming paragraphs.
At the outset, to elaborate my perception, I would like to stated that nowadays market is flooded my choices in the four corners of the world. In modern times of consumerist society it is cup of cake to purchase anything as the buying capacity of individual has increased bacause if affordable prices. Considering the other idea relating to my philosophy ,people are become workaholic which result into hight income and the certain proportion of this earning is paid to government in form of taxes. Government invested this funds on the infrastructural facilities and these are ultimately enjoyed my local community to improve their standard of living.
Probing further, considering the statement from another view that is paradoxical to my viewpoint, according to it this trend of consumerist society demolish the social customs and people are more focusing on gathering the material things or do not give importance to the moral values or beliefs. They exercise the unethical ways to increase their ways of earning . On the other hand, it give encouragement to buy unnecessarily things and waste of valuable money . The problem of waste management is inclining due to use and throw culture that has negative impact on the environment also.
To conclude, I would like to assert that people can live an ideal life if they devoted equally consideration to work as well as social customs as they are root of our life and indispensible part which can lead the society on the progressive path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00306748466 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86678597964 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.883535781 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.272727273 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193845905703 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601928356775 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478963669102 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109468265224 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509841121379 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.