In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, building new houses in the countryside is necessary to accommodate new city dwellers. Although some people argue that protecting the nature of this area should be a priority. I personally believe that providing places for residents are more important.
On the one hand, every year, an increase number of people move to big cities in search of finding a decent job. Accommodation is the first need of these migrants. In this way, governments should provide newcomers with housing. Since lacking of vacant land to be constructed new homes, they have to be prepared in the rural areas. Besides, migrants to metropolitans are more likely to cannot afford to rent a home in cities and need to inexpensive accommodations. These housings can be available just outside of the urban.
On the other hand, opponents claim that construction in the countries can have harmful effects on the environment. It cannot be avoided cutting down trees and also destroying local animal’s habitats to make a new place with basic amenities for the residents. Furthermore, From their point of view living in these areas leads to contaminate the nature and put animals endanger of extinction. In addition, housing in rural places means that individuals will lose tranquil places around their cities that people can go and wind down on the weekends there and be refresh for new week.
In conclusion, I personally believe that although new houses building can hurt the nature in some ways, but it is an issue that we cannot ride of it to provide amenities for group of people.
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- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.What is your opinion about this? 67
- These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in thecity.Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city ) andsuggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ssary to accommodate new city dwellers. Although some people argue that protecting the n...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t be avoided cutting down trees and also destroying local animal's habitats ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05769230769 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84807367683 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.712852341 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205128953378 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668556192307 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060925734817 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147164077602 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08217513178 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.