When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Each country has its own a variety of traditional culture. Whether or not the traditional skills and the ways of life should be eliminated according to the blooming of technology has provoked a controversy. Some people hold the opinion that traditional culture is not necessary in the modern life. Opponents, conversely, argue that it has a vital part in a country. From my perspective, I am more inclined to the latter view on the ground of the following reasons.
Admittedly, young people have many benefits from technology. No sooner were the computer and the internet invented than youngsters a...
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More significant,
More significantly,
not only does technology not put traditional values to extinct but it also can preserve and foster traditional life.
not only...not...
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