Q.. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisement tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which you agree?
Undoubtedly, in this competitive world, advertisement plays an important role in the buying nature of the consumers. It raises a controversial issue whether the advertisements compel us to purchase more than our need or it improves our daily lives. However, I believe that wise use of advertisement can uplift our lives.
The vital function of the advertisements is to inform the costumer about the entry of a new product, the manufacture, content, price or a service. It guides people through the market and services and a blessing for those who do not have enough time to search all these things ...
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inform the costumer --> customer typing mistake
Overall excellent essay
In my opinion: It guides
In my opinion:
It guides people through the market and services and a blessing for those
It guides people through the market and services and is a blessing for those
In other words, modern commercials not merely matchmaker of a consumer
In other words, modern commercials not merely are matchmakers of a consumer
Additionally, the buying pattern and success of a product is highly depended
Additionally, the buying pattern and success of a product highly depend on
Admittedly, many companies allocate a major share of their budget for introducing new products and using wisely for hiring celebrities
Admittedly, many companies allocate a major share of their budget for introducing new products and hiring celebrities
Being attracted by the spell of advertisements, people used to buy things, which is not necessary
Being attracted by the spell of advertisements, people get used to buy things which are not necessary
When a successful person or celebrity introduces these products, people blindly believe that, to become up to date in the fast world these products are inevitable.
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