Technology allows us to have a useful and interesting life than in the past .Do you agree or disagree?
The importance of technology which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion . this essay will elaborate both aspects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
there are myriad of reason which will further explain but the most preponderent stems from fact that technology help to finf anything . Beacuse of technology human life goes very easier and comfortable . Another pivotakl aspects of this argument is that technology develop person mind and help us in study and as well as we can visit and fill colleges fees and more other. Needless to say all merit stand of technology in good stead.
However there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming is that technology is very harmful in some cases like terrorist mostly use technology to blast and explore any city and country to attack there. Besides,technology can defecting on childrens like children do every activity on phone which is very unbeneficial for them.Hence it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of technology are instrumental indeed .Nevertheless,its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25112107623 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95897299483 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2280288845 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.111111111 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.25397266985 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113009567474 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510650777419 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290976193032 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638595915179 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393512167013 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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