For the time being, by industrializing the world and blooming the human population some of the aquatic and terrestrial creatures were vanished. Number of people believe that it is the most prominent problem for environment but some individuals claim that there have always been more vital problem. Personally, I assume although there are myriad of problem for our surrounding place but plants and animals extinction could be one of the most important culprit.
Firstly it is evident that, disappearing any kind of species will cripple the creatures living cycle, however we are observing number of phenomena which are occurring all over the world. For instance, when one type of trees is lost by deforestation, it affects on the other creatures on the area, and by passing the time it influences on the whole region and due to detrimental effect on the environment.
On the other hand, groups and community which consider the other problems more serious than extinction, have agreed on human base activity which lead to environmental defects. Activities which cause to water and air pollution, global warming and so on, not only diminish our living quality but also the main reason for harsh environmental problem.
In the way of conclusion, I reaffirm my point that plant and animal extinction is one of the most culprits of environmental problem. Because I have developed a keen interest moreover a lot of studies around flora and fauna issue. Although the recommendation of second group is rational but in my opinion passing the years will appear the truth.
- Some people think that there are now too many cars on the roads, and they are spoiling ourtowns and cities.Do you agree or disagree? 11
- The graph below shows cinema attendance by age in Great Britain 48
- New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumer.To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion. 56
- Dancing plays an important role in a culture. 76
- Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers.Do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...world and blooming the human population some of the aquatic and terrestrial creatures were ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssing the years will appear the truth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, so, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.140625 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88321474159 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.6683827945 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205303133729 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742795382591 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435233133377 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112451730214 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362811126389 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.