In many places, prisons are crowded and expensive for governments to maintain.
Yet, when offenders are released, they end up back in prison a short while latter.
Does prison work? Should lawbreakers be rehabilitated or punished?
In contemporary society, it is regretful that some prisoners end up back in jail after being released in several areas. However, this does not deny the crucial role of prison in maintaining social security. In my personal perspective, prison contributes greatly to the societal peacefulness in which inmates are both punished and rehabilitated to become law-abiding citizens.
It is obvious that prison helps to reform the thoughts and behaviors of the offenders. At first, being in prison provides the inmates a sufficient amount of time to reconsider their criminal behavior and its reverse ramifications. Moreover, jail is also an ideal place to educate the prisoners and make them become more responsible inhabitants. Thanks to this, the prisoners are able to reintegrate in society and avoid committing any crimes.
Since the mission of prison is to rehabilitate offenders as aforementioned, it is undeniable that inmates are worth suffering from strict punishment as a deterrent to their criminals. However, the death penalty is not encourageable in this case owing to moral reasons. Alternatively, after being punished, prisoners are required to engage in doing public service to bring them a sense of living purpose. A prime example is in Vietnam, where lawbreakers are strictly punished and educated in prison. After that painful period, some inmates have raised their awareness about their individual as well as national duties and become standard citizens.
In conclusion, the fact that prison helps to maintain social security and assure people about a safer society is undeniable. Simultaneously, prison is believed to be a reliable place to punish and train inmates to become responsible citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47744360902 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0834241784 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9987244627 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301388917282 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109007318604 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544656123605 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194200891671 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344718595122 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.