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The article states that zoos are essential for modern society and provides three reason of support. however, the professor explains that concerned groups have problem this argument and refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the reading states that animals are treated well in zoos. the professor refutes this point by stating that animals are not treated well. Not only do they preserve safty but also their managers don't respond. For example, some of amimals expose venom.
Second, the article claims that zoos are education. however, the professor contends that zoos are entertainment. animals attract visitors. zoos send massage us that use animals.
Third, the reading avers that zoos protect and preserve endangered species. The lecture opposes this point by saying that zoos help to protecting endangered species but they are poor success. For example, they conserve little number of animals in Brezil.
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- TPO 27 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying Use specific reasons and examp 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: The
... that animals are treated well in zoos. the professor refutes this point by stating...
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Suggestion: don't
... preserve safty but also their managers dont respond. For example, some of amimals e...
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Suggestion:
... some of amimals expose venom. Second, the article claims that zoos are educati...
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Suggestion: However
...article claims that zoos are education. however, the professor contends that zoos are e...
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Suggestion: Animals
...r contends that zoos are entertainment. animals attract visitors. zoos send massage us ...
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Suggestion: Zoos
...ntertainment. animals attract visitors. zoos send massage us that use animals. Thir...
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Message: Did you mean 'message'?
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...nt. animals attract visitors. zoos send massage us that use animals. Third, the readin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, third, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 30.3222958057 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 1373.03311258 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 142.0 270.72406181 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43661971831 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 4.04702891845 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31333472633 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 145.348785872 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 419.366225166 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 21.2450331126 47% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0425918719 49.2860985944 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.3846153846 110.228320801 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.9230769231 21.698381199 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0584495677267 0.272083759551 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232683669973 0.0996497079465 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436456377102 0.0662205650399 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0384863118541 0.162205337803 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022724446771 0.0443174109184 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 53.8541721854 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.09 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.7273730684 37% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.498013245 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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