Some new employees have just joined your company to gain work experience. Write a letter to them and say– What work do you do?– What will they be doing on their first day at work?– What should a person bring along on the first day?
Dear Colleagues,
The ABC company
Sub - Brief about induction
Greetings of the day,
I would like to welcome you all for joining us at our esteemed organization. Though you are new, i would like to brief some important roles & responsibilities which will make u to understand your job in better manner. Firstly, i will introduce myself, My name is jack & i will be your mentor for upcoming period. My main work is to take new comers through company, it's vitality, Rules, policies & do's & dont's. As company HR i want you to spent your beginning days by learning about company structure & functions.
On your first day u need bring your personal diary & pen & yes don't forget to bring pen drive which will help you take today's Notes of presentation so that you can memorize by glancing it once in future. I request you to pay attention as we will be having small examination for your learning across day. Wish you all the best & once again you are cordially invited at induction session.
Regards,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t induction Greetings of the day, I would like to welcome you all for join...
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Line 8, column 101, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eemed organization. Though you are new, i would like to brief some important role...
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Line 8, column 231, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and your job in better manner. Firstly, i will introduce myself, My name is jack...
^
Line 8, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anner. Firstly, i will introduce myself, My name is jack & i will be your mentor ...
^^
Line 8, column 275, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ll introduce myself, My name is jack & i will be your mentor for upcoming period...
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Line 8, column 415, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...itality, Rules, policies & dos & donts. As company HR i want you to spent your beg...
^^
Line 8, column 429, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., policies & dos & donts. As company HR i want you to spent your beginning days b...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g about company structure & functions. On your first day u need bring your pers...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d bring your personal diary & pen & yes dont forget to bring pen drive which will he...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...at you can memorize by glancing it once in future. I request you to pay attention as we w...
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Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t induction session. Regards, Jack
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8612716763 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69860778912 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687861271676 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.618496063 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.125 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240491943326 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886679352836 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430691243038 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119266759549 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753959771603 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.