TPO5 Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific theories discussed the reading passage.
The article states that zoos are essential for modern society and provides three reason of support. however, the professor explains that concerned groups have problem these arguments and refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the reading states that animals are treated well in zoos. The professor refutes this point by stating that animals are not treated well. he explaine that in a zoos, two red pandas died from exposure to rat venom. Not only don’t zoos maintain safty animals but also their managers don't respond this poor condition.
Second, the article claims that zoos are education. however, the professor contends that zoos are seen as entertainment. The animals in zoos attract visitors. he explains that zoos send massage us that use animals and they can not provide education place for visitors. also, he mentioned that zoos are misleading habitate.
Third, the reading avers that zoos protect and preserve endangered species. The lecture opposes this point by saying that zoos help to protecting endangered species but they had poor success. he says that they could conserve little number of endangered Tamarin in Brazil.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...y and provides three reason of support. however, the professor explains that concerned ...
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Suggestion: He
...ting that animals are not treated well. he explaine that in a zoos, two red pandas...
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Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a zoo' or simply 'zoos'?
Suggestion: a zoo; zoos
...e not treated well. he explaine that in a zoos, two red pandas died from exposure to r...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n safty animals but also their managers dont respond this poor condition. Second, ...
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Suggestion: However
...article claims that zoos are education. however, the professor contends that zoos are s...
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Suggestion: He
.... The animals in zoos attract visitors. he explains that zoos send massage us that...
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Message: Did you mean 'message'?
Suggestion: message
...ct visitors. he explains that zoos send massage us that use animals and they can not pr...
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Suggestion: Also
...t provide education place for visitors. also, he mentioned that zoos are misleading ...
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Suggestion: He
...ered species but they had poor success. he says that they could conserve little nu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 30.3222958057 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1373.03311258 70% => OK
No of words: 182.0 270.72406181 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3021978022 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40398900674 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 419.366225166 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5582398159 49.2860985944 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.9285714286 110.228320801 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 21.698381199 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0766712328604 0.272083759551 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279741666387 0.0996497079465 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259242892555 0.0662205650399 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470474399634 0.162205337803 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204490119434 0.0443174109184 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.57 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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