Dear Sir or Madam,
I was involved in an interview organised by your establishment on 24th July. The purpose of writing this letter is to confirm the status of my profile whether it has been shortlisted or not for the position.
It was a requirement for a Big Data Analyst role, matching with my skill-set. As intimidated by the organiser, the opportunity was for one of the Sydney-based banking clients with one year contract for people with expertise in Hadoop terminologies, Data-warehousing and ETL process.
Mr. Robbie Curva, the Data Scientist, involved in the hiring-process, was highly impressed with my technical knowledge, which gave me the indication of being the right candidate for this position. In fact, my relocation from Melbourne to Sydney was also discussed. At last, they informed that an offer letter would be emailed to me in the upcoming week.
However, the invitation is still not arrived. Being under notice period with my current employer, it is elusive to decide whether I should apply elsewhere or wait for your response. It would be much appreciated if you can update me in three working days so that I do not accept job offers from other organisations.
I look forward to receiving a prompt response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Pardeep Kumar
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 84
- Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 89
- some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we are care about them. others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
- You have read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter- Correct the information in the article- Explain why it is import 89
- some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we are care about them. others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. discuss both views and give your own opinion. 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, as for, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0985915493 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04957676515 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657276995305 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0447269345 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100436838883 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331148711788 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366535879797 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523411087705 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459719023262 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.