A crime is a crime. The line says it all. In dubitably, whether to seize the social rights of a person when he/she commits a crime knowingly is a debatable topic in modern times. I, on a personal level, think that the person must be punished and they should not be allowed to roam freely in society. These evil-minded people must be robbed of their civil rights.
Some people can go to any level to fulfill their selfish needs. These people are not suited to stay in society as they disturb other people and make a wrong impression on young minds. Hence, such wicked souls must be kept as away as possible. There people who are misanthropist; who hate people and perform very serious crimes. For example, a famous case in India, the Nirbhaya case. It was so brutal and unexpected that we question humanity here. The poor girl was raped over and over by three people and one of them was even a juvenile. How can people go to such extremes? Such people must be punished and never should be allowed to roam freely.
On second thought, there are also some crimes which occur because people have no other choice to make like for self-defense. To illustrate, consider that you are on gunpoint. What can you do? There is no choice and you will act reflexively and try to harm the person in front of you. This is an acceptable case and in this case, only the person must be given a clean sheet. As he was not acting violently on purpose. But, how many such types of cases are there? May be 1 in 1000 or less.
In India, the prisons allow prisoners to do some kind of work like making paper bags and stuff. Which in my opinion is not right. And such people must not be given a chance to earn money as they will not think they have done something wrong. And they will end up earning money and use it again once they leave the prison. Such money must be given to need which will help in both ways.
Hence, after a holistic analysis, it is evident that the people who are committing serious crimes must be punished and should be robbed fo their civil rights. This is only who justice will be served to ones who are poor prey of these absent-minded people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... kept as away as possible. There people who are misanthropist; who hate people and perf...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the person must be given a clean sheet. As he was not acting violently on purpose....
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... work like making paper bags and stuff. Which in my opinion is not right. And such pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, may, second, so, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22092323145 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7605291605 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5517241379 118.986275619 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7931034483 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.41379310345 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123693025157 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354120987791 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567673564039 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878366930792 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765902862827 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 14.1392134831 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 48.8420337079 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 12.1743820225 49% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 12.1639044944 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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