Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
new Roman","serif";mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">although many people hold the view that people learn other languages only because of their travels and jobs which have been in abroad, the other insist that reason are not mere reasons. This essay will examine both side of the debates and propound my partial reasons to announce my affirmative opinion with former idea.
new Roman","serif";mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">
new Roman","serif";mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">In nowadays societies, because of variety factors, individuals should study overseas languages, on the ground following reasons:
new Roman","serif";mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">first and foremost cause is people for being up-dated and successful in their own occupations or life, they have to use new methods or progressed one, which never happened but they investigate and usually those are in other languages. Thus, if they know that language, they will be able to utilize those techniques. Secondly, most of students should give some lectures or some researches as a thesis for their graduations, and usually the most essays are written in other languages, especially English language. so they should learn it for gathering the best resources and information. Thirdly, learning foreign languages not only are companies have to use for expanding their communications, but also use it for best-sellers, which has been essential for being permanent in the market. To exemplify, companies should sell their products in global market, so they should find the best one. it could not be fulfill accept having supportive and strong international language.
new Roman","serif";mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">
new Roman","serif";mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">On the other hand, most common people have not reasons which have been mentioned in advance. they learn new languages for their travels or working in other country. although these reasons have the most portion of these issue, those are not the only factors.
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new Roman","serif"; mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi; mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">In conclusion, in my personal opinion, not only is not the first aspect the only reasons, but also those are two of the most commons, and the most significant reason is making communication between civilizations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2831.0 1615.20841683 175% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 8.68404907975 5.12529762239 169% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 15.0100537775 2.80592935109 535% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527607361963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 818.1 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.5 1.60771543086 156% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.294155149 49.4020404114 446% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.769230769 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086282983451 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825161376712 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775062303723 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563095696515 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640060928769 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -30.04 50.2224549098 -60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.7 11.3001002004 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 33.36 12.4159519038 269% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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