the diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Austarila town.
The figure depicts a way of the collect drinking water in an Australia town.
Overall, it can be seen that, gathering of water is a multistep and linear process, which consist of three stages; collecting, filtering and treatment with chemicals.
In the first stage, rainwater are gathered with the drain system from homes roof and each house collect the rainwater in this way. Next this water are passed with underground drains to filtering section.
In the second stage, collected water from homes roof are filtered to remove any impurities. Next, to storing, filtered water are passed to storage tank via pipes.
In the third and final stage, stored water are transported to treatment division with the pipes. After that, water that come from storage tank are cleaned with the chemical compound for consumption. Finally, cleaned water are distributed to home with the pipes for usage in home.
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- Nowadays the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it? 56
- the diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Austarila town. 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... collect the rainwater in this way. Next this water are passed with underground ...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rainwater in this way. Next this water are passed with underground drains to fi...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... home with the pipes for usage in home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12925170068 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48046651799 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578231292517 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5851981676 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7777777778 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208987477816 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998640746178 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822848535602 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136459797453 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967237611529 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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