Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate between people on whether lazy journalism has positive or negative impacts on society. While some people think lazy journalism is reasonable. I am of the opinion that lazy journalism is irresponsible. In this essay, I will explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
To start with, it is undeniable there are many reasons for people to support lazy journalism. For example, it is claimed that the editors have so much pressure, and they need to use lazy journalism to finish their tasks.
However, those who argue for the negative impacts of lazy journalism have a different view. Firstly, the most obvious argument lies in the fact that the journalists’ duty is to investigate and report the truth. According to a survey conducted by China Daily that many journalists do not want to undercover the truth. Furthermore, it should be taken into account that the biased and inaccurate materials will mislead the public. From my experience, I usually read some fake news which is very misleading.
To conclude, although some people think lazy journalism is understandable, I am strongly convinced that lazy journalism is caused by irresponsible behaviors, because it has more disadvantages than advantages, based on what has been discussed above.
- Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve? 55
- What is your idea about lazy journalism that is commonplace in digitalized world? 72
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22169811321 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06214193713 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1717846185 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19240522972 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722205555545 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069450196459 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124501838543 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545489048046 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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