Presenting gifts to others is often discouraged, as it leads to monetary investment in offerings that are of no use to individuals. It seems that with these presents, masses represent their affection and respect to each other. There are arguments on both sides, which will be discussed here.
On the one hand, it has been observed that, with self-chosen gifts, individuals devote their valuable time in creating hand-made products or purchasing them from the market, which actually enhances their love and feelings towards that person. For instance, when a brother buys a gift for her sister on her birthday, the value of that item increases automatically, as it becomes a prized-possession for her; turning knots of their relation to be stronger. Thus, such rituals assist in the strengthening of relationships.
On the other hand, other alternatives, such as presenting money on several occasions, could instil materialistic attitude among masses, as they become habitual of it. This attitude is not only detrimental for individuals but also leads to misunderstandings in the relations. To cite an illustration, my uncle, Sam, had a broken marriage only because of this attitude, as he had money demanding habit from his in-laws in numerous festivals; ultimately, leading him to have a divorce. Hence, it proves that other options, such as physical money, develop mercenary behaviour among individuals.
To conclude, although offering of items on different ceremonies is deemed an obsolete practice, such traditions are incredibly beneficial in maintaining healthy relationships and be in touch with others.
- You feel the evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting.Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter:Explain why you do not like the current programsDescribe what kind of programs you would like to see inst 78
- You have read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter- Correct the information in the article- Explain why it is import 89
- You had just missed a friend's party. Write a letter apologising and stating reasons- why you couldn't attend- how you will compensate- Ask how fun it was 73
- You feel the evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting.Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter:Explain why you do not like the current programsDescribe what kind of programs you would like to see inst 78
- Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community sugg 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng gifts to others is often discouraged, as it leads to monetary investment in of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, so, then, thus, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.476 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22812886979 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4480515993 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.454545455 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0776398199162 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306115793574 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294794891049 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465546862399 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044106267556 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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