Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve?
Nowadays, when it comes to the right balance between work and other aspects of life, it is commonly believed that balance is important. However, there is an ongoing debate between people on whether it is hard to achieve balance. While it is possible for some people to think that it is easy, I am of the opinion that the balance is hard to achieve. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of this argument.
To start with, it is undeniable that some people are freelancers, and they can balance their work and life extremely well. For example, they can work at home, which means that they can take care of their children.
However, those who argue for the difficulty of balance have a different view. Firstly, an obvious argument lies in the fact that a lot of people have to work hard and do not have time for fun. According to the report conducted by China Daily, many workers have to work over 60 hours per week, and they do not have time to take care of children. In addition, there is another concern that people need to spend time on nurturing relationships, which will waste their time for work. From my experience, if I spend too much time on socializing, my grade will decrease dramatically.
Overall, although some people think it is easy to balance work and life, I am strongly convinced that our society is competitive and it is very hard for balance because it has more advantages than disadvantages, based on what has been discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62030075188 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53620123294 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533834586466 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2783964128 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.416666667 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30019136129 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111350278659 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076488722144 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179974003401 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776573781857 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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