Nowadays, the designs of the buildings in the community are affected by other cultures. This results in loss of cultural identity of the structures in the community. People would claim that buildings should be built using a traditional style for the protection of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement and give your opinion.
With the advancement in modern architecture, some are of the belief that it is not important anymore to make buildings that will show the culture of the society where they are built. However, I am of the opinion that the design of the buildings must reflect the cultural identity of the city.
The city’s cultural identity must be inculcated in every piece of architectural work as it do not only stand as the heart of the town but also symbolizes the history of the place and how it came to be. Apart from that, the distinct features of every building can stand as the heritage of the city just like most of the cities in China where they build infrastructures that show the culture of their cities. In fact, it is known as one of the countries where its people build establishments that reflect the never-ending loyalty and support to it.
Furthermore, creativity in the innovative design of the buildings are showcased because architects and engineers are able to get to know more about the history of the region. In addition to this, they become fully aware of the implications of the designs they are going to make and in the process of making them, they will prevent themselves from making an output that they may regret in the end. These results in them becoming culturally sensitive and able to respect the people and its heritage.
To conclude, although modernization can provide creativity with how buildings are made, I am one of those who think that these should be built according to the city’s cultural identity. It does not only reflect the region and the people but it also preserves their history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, may, so, apart from, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80141843972 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72668980301 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503546099291 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1623222986 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.4 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216526260188 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910555013853 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419639139248 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138778823741 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309642296416 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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