Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

With the advancement in technology, the world has become global resulting in scientists predicting that in future people will speak only one language. However, I believe that this will negatively impact society because of the rising unemployment rate and damaging the culture of a country.

Undoubtedly, speaking the same language have its benefits. Most important advantage will be the ease of communication among people as everybody will speak the same language. Also, it will help tourists, who can travel without the fear of having a language barrier. That will positively impact on the relations of countries. However, this trend will raise the issue of unemployment for the people who are working as translators and interpreters. Therefore, one global language can have its benefits but people will lose their livelihood because of it.

Another major problem of single language will be the damaging of the culture of a country. Since the language is associated with the culture of a country and mostly the folklore's and history are in local languages. Therefore, by having only one language for communication will result in the diminishing of culture and history of a country.

Furthermore, the new generation will not be aware of past glories and achievements of ancestors. For instance, the mode of communication in northern parts of Pakistan was Urdu but the new generation is communicating in the English language, as a result, they are not only unaware of folklore's but also achievements.

In conclusion, having a single language will not only increases unemployment but also diminishes the culture and history of a country. Therefore, I strongly believe that it will have a negative effect on our society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29818181818 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05293030891 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476363636364 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4837050653 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229559555715 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894762532124 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427610503043 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129393173666 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767175181421 0.056905535591 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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