Science advanced so much that it can make it possible for people to live 100 years or even 200 years. Some people think that its good and few other think it's bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It's an undeniable fact that science and technology have brought so many meticulous changes in the lives of human beings . Majority of people believe that these changes are in our favour but few other have totally opposite views. this essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail along with my own point of view.
Healthcare is the fundamental right of each person in almost all countries. Each year governments spend a huge part of their budget on hospitals and medical facilities and beside this they also focus on conducting empirical researches to develop new vaccine so that the people can live long and the authorities and curb on their expenses. In my opinion its a progressive approach,for instance, if a person live long then it's quite obvious that he will work for a long time and it will have a direct impact on the workforce of a Nation. Secondly, it's an acceptable fact that present is the continuation of past and the old people always possess many vital knowledge which they can share further with the young generations.
On the contrary, several people have contradictory viewpoints, they assume that the increased life expectancy can create some serious issues related to unemployment as the old generation will keep holding their positions and the new one won't be able to find any decent career. In addition to this, the old folk not only will be dependent on their family members but at the same time the government will also have to bear their expenses, such as pension and other benefits. Last but not the least, it's very common that after a certain age we will become physically week and everybody expect security from the government and this demand will again but burden on the authorities shoulder.
In conclusion, the advantages outweight the disadvantages and in my opinion the government should continue their work for the betterment of general people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96238244514 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69118751379 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7767283135 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.909090909 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166817260153 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630003847771 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361843040567 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101182653198 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534023860969 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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