tpo38 the extinction of several species at the end of Triassic period
The material discusses several hypothesis that caused the extinction many species at the end of the Triassic period. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
First, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely extinction of many species happened dur to the reduction in the sea level. Next, the temperature was very low during this time. Finally, the asteroid crashed the Earth’s surface and blocked the sunlight.
Conversely, the listening challenges the points, one specific contradiction is the animals that lived in the shallow and costal water adapted any change happened in the sea level; moreover, at the end of the Triassic period fluctuated in the sea level was quite gradually. Extinction happens when the sea level declines much more sudden. In addition to that, sulfur dioxide could lower global temperature, but it Just happened for short period, because excess sulfur dioxide washed out by rain so the atmosphere was cleared out; furthermore, sulfur dioxide should stay long enough to cause decline in the temperature. One final point, id an asteroid hit the earth, people should find any deposits from this crash; however, the substances appeared were created from twelve million years before extinction. It was a long period passed that hard to cause the extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hypothesis seems to be countable; consider using: 'several hypotheses', 'several hypothesises'.
Suggestion: several hypotheses; several hypothesises
The material discusses several hypothesis that caused the extinction many species...
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Line 3, column 869, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssed that hard to cause the extinction.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 220.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38181818182 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65462328653 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622727272727 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2108578416 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06452816374 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233180648508 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101969614059 0.0996497079465 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162044103218 0.0662205650399 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185299030184 0.162205337803 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133869481358 0.0443174109184 302% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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